BirdKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL: Valentines Day]

Nonsense

I really like the nonsense in this movie. Although I still find the computer voices to be totally inaudiable. Still though, I liked it overall.

Gangsta-Bamsemus responds:

I HOPE YOU STEP ON A FUCKING LANDMINE!!!!!!!!

[S.I.N:: "The Angels"]

Trying to achieve as many clichés as possible

I don't want this low score to seem cruel, but I find this movie very, very trite. It lacks any kind of substance or originality, and it feels like I'm watching clips from other better animations I watched in the early 90s. It's crammed full of old clichés that were never really that cool in the first place and it tries to hard to create a sympathetic character, but instead they feel very contrived. The author should work on the quality of writing a little more.

Xero-Shift responds:

I agree with you to an extent. The thing is, I wrote the script way back before the summer when I wasn't really sure where this series was going. Since then a lot of ideas about the story and such popped into my head but I was kind of limited to this script that I wrote a while ago. I can admit, there are some cliches in it, but it draws more from my inspiration from anime :)

I will defineately try to improve the quality of my writing for future episodes.

Thanks for the review