BirdKing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL: Valentines Day]

Nonsense

I really like the nonsense in this movie. Although I still find the computer voices to be totally inaudiable. Still though, I liked it overall.

Gangsta-Bamsemus responds:

I HOPE YOU STEP ON A FUCKING LANDMINE!!!!!!!!

[BeautifulMorningWithYou]

Confused

A very confused piece. It's lost somewhere between taking itself seriously and being funny, leaving the viewer wondering how exactly they're supposed to feel about this. But it's not without some merit.

[S.I.N:: "The Angels"]

Trying to achieve as many clichés as possible

I don't want this low score to seem cruel, but I find this movie very, very trite. It lacks any kind of substance or originality, and it feels like I'm watching clips from other better animations I watched in the early 90s. It's crammed full of old clichés that were never really that cool in the first place and it tries to hard to create a sympathetic character, but instead they feel very contrived. The author should work on the quality of writing a little more.

Xero-Shift responds:

I agree with you to an extent. The thing is, I wrote the script way back before the summer when I wasn't really sure where this series was going. Since then a lot of ideas about the story and such popped into my head but I was kind of limited to this script that I wrote a while ago. I can admit, there are some cliches in it, but it draws more from my inspiration from anime :)

I will defineately try to improve the quality of my writing for future episodes.

Thanks for the review